karchesky

Hola mi querida, mi nombre es ndeye favor, soy una chica joven encantadora y cariñosa con un buen corazón,
Puedo visitar tu perfil y me encanta lo que se coloca allí, parece que vamos en la misma dirección, creo en la realidad del amor, vamos a caminar hacia fuera de nuestro deseo de corazón, así que me gusta algunas cosas maravillosamente, pero nada es hermoso a menos que pueda encontrar alguien a quien usted lo comparta con, algunos con una buena salud para el diálogo del amor con el tema. la hora de escribir su respuesta, responda yo directo a mi buzón de correo privado (favorndeye @ yaho o (.) com)
kiss kiss 4u favor.


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Hello my dear my name is favor ndeye,I am a lovely and caring young girl with a good heart,
I visit your profile and i love what you place in there, it seems that we're going the same direction, I believe in reality of love, let walk it out for our heart desire, so i love a beautifully things but nothing is beautiful unless you found some one whom you will share it with, some with a good health to dialog the issue love with. when posting your reply, reply me direct to my private mail box (favorndeye@yaho o (.) com)
kiss kiss favor 4u.

Aw, thanks! I didn't post all of the Imaginary Daughter comics here on account of ToonPool not being really storyline oriented. If you'd like to keep reading, please drop by my main site. Again, thanks for your comments :)

Hi Karchesky!I like ur style, really great comics!Greetings Jule

Again,you're welcome! =)

you're welcome!Glad that I can help =)
best wishes,
mariposa :D

Thanks Harm! I'm glad you like it and I hope you continue reading it :)
Thank you for your criticism as well. The truth is I'm just an amateur cartoonist, but I'm looking forwards to become better at this craft. In fact much of the purpose of "Imaginary Daughter" is to provide me with something where I can practice and hone my [meager] drawing/storytelling skills.
I'm aware of the "wooden" look of the characters. I'm trying to make them a bit more dynamic, at least as far as the plot permits it. Hopefully the latest strips (on my site) are better in this sense? Though I know I have a long way to go...
Color in the strips has been rather hit or miss, with more "miss" than anything. Here I'm also torn between narrowing down the palette and getting a more coherent look, or go for the whole color spectre and get some eye-candy going (people do seem to like more color). So, I guess I'll just keep on experimenting...
I know what you mean about ToonPool. I don't know if I'll upload the remaining strips. Perhaps, as you say, a few choice ones would work better. On the other hand, I only update the strip once a week, so maybe just the one strip per week would work out alright? I don't know...
Anyways, thanks for your insight and I hope you keep reading Imaginary Daughter :)

hi karchesky,
i like your story "Imaginary Daughter" and read all availble pages at your website. it's a bit like theater for two persons. very interesting.
although i think you have to work on your style. it sometimes looks a bit "wooden". same on the colours. more homogeneously would look better. this "critics" should not sound arrogantly and should not discourage you. it's just my point of view as a professional comic book artist. all in all i think you have great potential!
on the other hand: in my opinion toonpool isn't the right place to present a complete comic story. people will not be able to read the pages in the right order. toonpool is more for single cartoons or one page comics. imagine somebody would upload a complete manga book. it would overflow the portal. i suggest to upload only a few selected pages with a hint in the picture and in the artist comment like "example from my work Imaginary Daughter. full story at http://karchesky.com/"

all the best,
harm

Thanks, I hope you like the future strips as well!

hey! I like ur comics - interesting style

Thank you, gracias... that's about it for my language skills ;)